Black Ghost

Ch. 1 It was an unbearably hot day in the land of Samutone as a large crowd of people were gathered at a nearby tower. They had been waiting there ...

I really enjoyed this chapter of your story. Though I think you could have described all the dragons at the begginnig and their names, unless they weren't that important. Great ...

I liked it, it was pretty funny. Also I liked the long name at the beggining. GOOD JOB!